Romeo and juliet balcony scene clip reviews

clip 1

- he has a bit of mustery in the way he delivered his line.
- he started his monolouge as if to say he knew she was going to be on the balcony which wasn't a good idea because it gives the scene away before it even happens.
-lack of face and voice expression

clip 2
-too much going on but he delivered the lines really well and it was belivable
-his aware of where he is and is always keepign a look out to make sure he didn't get caight
-he needs to play with his face expression or make it clearer, but apart from that everything else is good.

clip 3

-he started off a bit traditiona, he seemed uncomfortable but changed it and it seemed fresh and different which actually worked well.

-he looked as if he was uncomfotrable when doing his lines and you could tell by his body language that he was hold himself back from full expressing himself.

clip 4

-he got the language good but perfromance wise he was awful. he didn't know what to do with his body and what movements to play around with which would go with the monolouge.

clip 5

-he understands the language but he dosen't know how to play around with the scene properly.
-he looks like his holding something back and not fulling expressing the emotions that are needed for this scene and getting himslef deeply into character.

clip 6

- he has no clue what the scene is about or what is been said. the way his delievering his lines is as if he reading it off the script for the first time. he didn't even try play around with his character at all.
-he seems like he had a couple of booz and cam to deliver his lines.

clip 7

-It's as if the guy is reading straight of a poster. You could tell his did not understand the text when he started learning the lines.

clip 8

-he talks in the same tone through out the whole scene which is really bad especailly for play "Romeo"
- he talks as if his being forced to say his lines.

Shakespare Monologue 2

May it please your grace -

Antiphlous my husband

who i made lord of me

and all i have

at your important letters

this ill day

a most outrageous fit if madness

took him

that desp'rately he hurried through

the streets with him

his bondsman

all as mad as he

doing displeasure to the citizens

by rushing in their houses

bearing thence

rings jewels

any thing his rage did like

once did i get him bound

and sent him home

whlist i wot not by what strong

escape he broke from those that

gaurds of him

and with his maf attedant

and himslef

each one with ireful passion

with draw swords

Comdey of errors

Comedy of errors is the shortest plays william shakespeare had ever wrote. It was written between 1589 or 1595 but wasnt published until 1623 where it first appered in  First Folio.

The play is set in Ephesus, Greece.

The comdey errors is about Egeon and Emelia husband and wife, Father and mother of twins Antiphous of Ephesus and Antiphous of syrcues and their servants Diomo of Ephesus and Diomo of Syrcues. the family got seperated by a storm at sea. Egeon his son Antiphlous S and their serevant Diomo S survied together and they lived in Syrcues.The other half of the family survived together but the Antiphlous and Diomo S got stolen from Emeila by a fisherman, she then became a nun.


The comdey of errors is full of mix-up and witty dialogue. the charcters includde two sets of twins Antipholus of Ephesus and his servent Dromio of Ephesus and Antipholus of Syracus his servent Dromio of Syracuse. Antipholus of Ephesus is unware that he has a twin brother, who has has come to the same town where he lives and his causing trouble. Antiphlous of Ephesus wife Adriana catches Antipholus of Syracuse doing mischife in town and she coufuses him with her husband and gose off the the Duke of Ephesus to tell him what is going on, That's when my monologue starts.

Comteporary monoluge 2 : Reasons to be pretty

Comteporary monoluge 2

HE HURT ME
HE REALLY DID
I MEAN I CAN TAKE A LOT PRETTY MUCH ANYWAYS
BUT
I’M LIKE
MY FACE
NOT THAT I THINK I’M A BEAUTY
AN OLD FASHION GLAMOUR GIRL OR ANYTHING
I DONT
BUT I’M NOT BAD YOU KNOW
NOT BAD AT ALL
AND EVEN IF I WAS UGLY
I’M SAYING
EVEN IF I WAS NOT CUTE
OR CLOSE TO THAT
UNATTRACTIVE  BUT WORDS STANDARDS
DON’T I DESERVE TO BE WITH SOMEONE WHO FINDS ME BEAUTIFUL
I THINK SO
ITS NOT A MATHS EQUATION OR ANYTHING
ITS FAIRLY SIMPLE
YOU CANT BE WITH A GUY WHO FINDS YOU UNPLEASENT TO LOOK AT
EVEN ON THE FENCE
HOW CAN I
KNOWING HIS SITTING ACROSS FROM ME
BUT HIS ALWAYS REACHING FOR SOMETHING
THE SALT OR ANYTHING
AND WHY
BECAUSE HE DOSENT WANT TO MAKE EYE CONTACT WITH YOU
THAT WOULD SUCK
COMPLETELY SUCK
IF YOU WAS THAT WOMAN
AND THAT WOMAN WAS GOING TO BE ME
I’M SAYING ONCE I KNEW HOW HE FELT ABOUT ME
THAT’S ALL I HAD TO LOOK FORWARD TO

Title and Author

Flesh wound by che walker

   Brief Synopsis

Vincent is always in trouble, this time with the infamous Calderazzos. His sister Deirdra my character stays out of danger in her flat high above the streets of London, and her brother Vincent come and seeks help from her. He asks her to go and get some bullets from an old mate of hi, and on her way she gets picked up by the Calderazzos brother and was taken to see their mom for a chat. And she ends up hearing a baby cry in the background and stray away she knew it was her brothers.

Genre and style of the play.

The genre of the play I would say its quit violence, because it has a lot of fighting and blood.

Character you have chosen

The character I’ve chosen is Vincent’s sister Deirdra. Deirdra minds her own business and tries to keep herself well out of her brothers problems but she finds it hard cause his always coming to her for help. She lives on her own in a high flat in the streets of London.

What appeals to you about this play?

What appeals to me about this play is that it’s different, it has confusions in it which makes me want to read it even more, and it’s got a lot of action and violence which is different to the type of stuff I read.

 What appeals to you about this character?

The character I choose appeals to because her life’s is always hanging on the edge of the stuff her brother dose which can harm her in anyway. And having a brother that a bit crazy and a father that’s a bit mad makes her seem to take responsibility of both their actions and I wanted to try a challenging monologue and this is the perfect one to start with.

    What is going to be the biggest challenge in playing this role?

 I think the biggest challenge in playing this role would me to imagine that my family is full of mental people and I’m the only normal one.

 What will you need to work on physically?

 I think I need to really work on my body language to make it more realistic.

 What will you need to work on vocally?

 I will need to work on projecting my voice and really send it across the room so everyone can understand every word I’m saying.

 What will you need to work on emotionally?

 I will need to work on being shocked scared and angry all at the same it because of what had just happened to me. Using these emotions and different levels of each one I would be able to fine the right one I could use when delivering my monologue.

 What background research will you need to do?

 I will need to search more about my character and how to act the way I think she would behaviour. I also need to be able to play with different emotions and volume of my voice to see what works and what doesn’t.

 What impact should this piece have upon an audience?

In think they would be a bit confused at first but then understand that Vincent done something with the Calderazzos boy’s sister and the result ended up with a baby.

Stella katula